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Anger, Tolerance and Change
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:29:05 AM in AEST
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hbadday
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I'm clinging to you
My arms squeezing you into my apologetic heart in attempts to keep you and to fulfill an insatiable thirst from somewhere locked behind my chest
Curled at your feet in child's pose weeping, sobbing
Franticly grasping any way to reverse the wilting of a rose
Hurriedly racking my brain- my being to diffuse the symptoms of autumn and distill it's effects on the leaves
Desperately urghing the Phoenix of my heart to shed it's tears and heal your wounded spirits
Cry, Phoenix, cry
Prevent autumnal withering
Undo the rose's wilt
Give forth your tear and make bitter venom silky sweet
Shed a pearly tear and take away the pain
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2004-12-20 05:29:05]
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Re: Anger, Tolerance and Change
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by Stitch on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:01:58 AM AEST
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You need to watch your spelling, Chels, but this is a marvel. Your deep understanding of bitter wounds and God's awesome healing is so vividly portrayed. This is the kind of gem I come to this site to read.
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Re: Anger, Tolerance and Change
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by lifefliesby on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:33:05 AM AEST
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Great write Chelsea.
You have an amazing talent here.
Keep it up.
I love you babe,
Jared J. |
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Re: Anger, Tolerance and Change
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:34:10 AM AEST
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O_O Uh..wow....
*speechless*
Well hun. I gotta agree with Stitchy here. This truly is a marvel.
It's so nice to be able to read your poems again :D
I really don't know what to say.
Stunning work,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Anger, Tolerance and Change
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 06:13:12 PM AEST
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I love how your poems are just so abstract. The comparisons you used in this poem were all so different, yet their similarities is what made this poem well worth the read. Nicely done, my friend. Keep posting.
~Carrie~ |
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