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The girl in my mirror
Contributed by
Dark_Angel_BabAy
on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
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look into the mirror,
Who is the gurl I see?
She looks at me with those eyes,
Not empty ones,
Ones that are deep and hurt,
One single tear flows down her cheek,
And quickly she wipes it away,
No one may ever see her cry,
She must cover up the pain,
The pain of living or the pain of dying,
Which one is worse,
or which one is better,
That fake smile,
You know the one that kills,
Crosses her face as she leaves,
She greets her friends,
And no one ever knows the truth,
No one really knows that she is between life and death,
Not outside, But on the inside,
Underneath it all.
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Dark_Angel_BabAy
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2002-11-29 18:00:00]
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Re: The girl in my mirror
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by Haligh on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 07:18:10 PM AEST
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| good poem...but the "gurl" spelling kind of wrecked it for me. |
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Re: The girl in my mirror
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by plous on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 07:54:58 PM AEST
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yes, more stuff like that, that was a good read.
I will give it 5 stars. |
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Re: The girl in my mirror
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by FaithHope on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 09:30:40 PM AEST
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This poem was very deep and full of emotion. Please let your heart sing again
*faith*hope |
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Re: The girl in my mirror
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by OreO on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 10:00:39 PM AEST
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Beautiful write.. Thanks for
sharing this one. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: The girl in my mirror
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by Merd on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 11:39:45 PM AEST
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| wonderful write, full of emotion, and hurt. hopefully you'll get better and will stay away from the inside death. |
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Re: The girl in my mirror
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by Gin on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 07:19:05 PM AEST
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this is a great write and it is one that I, myself can relate to. Thanx for sharing it. It's comforting to know that I'm not the only one out there with the same thoughts and feelings as you expressed in your poem.
thanx again
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Re: The girl in my mirror
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by juves_angel on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 02:48:25 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed that poem....
i have the same feelings a lot fo the time...
if you ever need anyone to talk to you can come to me!!! =)
-Mandy |
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