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DARK AGES
Contributed by
bebe
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:36:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Through the dark ages I lie,
oh how much i cry.
I call for help,
but all i get is a big fat whelp.
I think i have and obsession,
but all i feel is an expression.
When I start to feel that I have peace,
my body just begins to cease.
This is my current life,
but I feel as if im a knife.
Oh the pain im in,
please Lord let me renue my self again.
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bebe
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Re: DARK AGES
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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| Nice work. Thank you for sharing :-) |
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Re: DARK AGES
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by Summerwine on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:41:42 AM AEST
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| I think your expression is the way of renewing yourself.... well written, Yvonne |
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Re: DARK AGES
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by corrupted_minds on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 03:00:55 AM AEST
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Nice short write.
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Re: DARK AGES
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 10:08:23 PM AEST
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BeBe
Whelp ?
I hope you are not in an abusive situation. If so RUN tell the police a minister or friend get the help if this is what you need. I found your poem a little scary--Hope I'm wrong.
write more
Peace of Christ be at your side.
Sinned
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