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Lost In The Nothing
Contributed by
girlg0newrong
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 09:26:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I watched her
When she noticed she turned her face away
I observed her through the reflection in the car window
I saw the tears she cried in silence
I'm not sure what they meant
I'm not sure she knew either
She just stared out into the darkness
As if making a silent plea with the night
I don't know what it was about
I know nothing of the reason behind the longing in her eyes
Longing that had all but burnt out to a pile of careless ashes
She didn't fidget or ever so much as sigh
Her breathing was shallow but steady
Her hands fell limp and resting on the seat
Her flesh seemed so colorless
Everything about her being seemed to scream out in lack of life
But she sat calmly,uncaring,lost in the nothing
I seem to remember a girl with a smile
A smile so bright it fooled the world
It got her through, it worked so well
So well only she and I knew it was fake
I seem to recall some light in those green eyes
But that light belonged to a different girl
In a different place, in a different time
A girl who thought she could defeat the odds and make a place for herself in the wolrd
A girl who had faith enough to at least hope her exsistence wasn't a mistake
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girlg0newrong
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2004-12-19 21:26:59]
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Re: Lost In The Nothing
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 09:56:14 PM AEST
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| Great write, i know what its like to be lost. |
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Re: Lost In The Nothing
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:19:08 PM AEST
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this is a great write....i know this feeling...i know how much it hurts...if u ever need to talk to someone PM me please....excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: Lost In The Nothing
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:28:51 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. Just know your exsistence isn't a mistake. God loves you.
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Re: Lost In The Nothing
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:12:59 AM AEST
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The Creater doesn't make mistakes.We are all made in His image.You my girl are a beautiful being.
Like all of us searching for something.
You have a good use of words keep posting.
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