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I Hate You Michael
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:24:26 PM in AEST
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I wish Wednesday was the end of the world.
At least that way Michael wouldn't be around.
Edmond wouldn't seem so dear,
And Brian would be gone too.
So would I, and she would as well,
But at least they didn't have her.
I didn't have to hear those stories anymore,
Or hear her voice over the phone.
It bothers me to feel this way,
Still longing for a woman that won't return.
Return my calls or letters, nothing seems to bother her anymore.
I am a lonely broken Cancer, and my heart is served in a dish.
My Aries, my beautiful Aries, please die with me.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
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2004-12-19 18:24:26]
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Re: I Hate You Michael
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:57:06 PM AEST
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| good sad write wish my world ended hope urs goes well |
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Re: I Hate You Michael
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by neglected1 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:29:11 PM AEST
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this is such a sad write...
but maybe this was for the better... i hope you are eventually able to move on ... dont wish your life away so soon... great things will end up happening to you..
great write
luck to you
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Re: I Hate You Michael
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:30:41 PM AEST
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I know how you feel in this, but it truly was an excellent write Dane...absolutely breath-taking
Mason |
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Re: I Hate You Michael
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 02:35:51 PM AEST
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Here to thank you for comments on a write I did and I begin to understand the comment more fully now I think. Hoping she will Step Into The Light, and if not ... ( sigh ) wow, man I've been there just do a Motel 6 impersonation ... leave the light on for her, but move to the next in line ... someone out there that you don't see ... sees you right now.
Powerful write, Dane my friend. Powerful.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: I Hate You Michael
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:43:54 PM AEST
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wow i am sorry you feel this way.
All i can say is it's her lost.
take care. |
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Re: I Hate You Michael
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 25th October 2014 @ 07:59:01 AM AEST
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tragically romantic. I actually hurt for you here. I felt that way one time when I was young and my heart was an open thing, susceptible to every breeze and scratch.
I like it for content and loathe it for the pain it represents.
Well done.
Mike |
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