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Catacombs
Contributed by
Apolla
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:47:29 PM in AEST
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In the depths of my mind hide thought's I' d never dare to speak.
Thoughts of suicide,
Slitting my wrists and ending my greif.
In the catacombs of my mind they remain,
Forever tauting me with their seductive illusions.
But my mind tries to protect me from myself,
And entangles me in a web of lies and tricks.
Tormenting me with the casual way it plays with my soul,
As if it were a cat with a roll of yarn.
Forever entranced with anothers torment,
Mindless games that have no end.
Copyright ©
Apolla
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2004-12-19 16:47:29]
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Re: Catacombs
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:51:58 PM AEST
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| yea like u said short but good what r catacombs?? hmm yea keep it up |
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Re: Catacombs
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by Artemis03 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:53:07 PM AEST
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| So what if it's short!... I like this write...cuz for some reason..I heard it being spoken in a eerie voice. So it brought it out. muwahaha |
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Re: Catacombs
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by DanishPoet on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:15:27 PM AEST
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True, the human mind is a fragile (and deceiving) thing.
For the one who asked: Catacombs > a dungeon of graves you migth say. A cave underneath the earth, where you keep the dead.
Surely that word is essential when reading this poem.
Well written.
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Re: Catacombs
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:19:20 PM AEST
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this may b short....but i love it....fantastic poem....great work
Lots of Love
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