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I Remember
Contributed by
SharonAngel
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:39:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I Remember
I remember a time when I thought you were the kindest person.
When I thought you were the smartest person I knew,
You could do anything you set your mind to do.
I was so proud of you, proud that you were you.
I had all the faith in the world that you would someday be someone great.
I always stood behind your every decision and beside you when others hoped you would fail.
Then one day I grew up and saw you for the person you truly were.
You are a weak depressed dreamer, a wonderer, a drunk and a failure.
I could not bear to look at you another moment.
So with tear filled eyes, I turned away from the mirror and walked away.
Written By: Sharon Angel
12/19/04
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SharonAngel
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2004-12-19 16:39:18]
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Re: I Remember
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:43:06 PM AEST
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| good write wish i could remember like that when i looked at myself |
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Re: I Remember
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:10:05 PM AEST
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Great write..really very touching...loved it..and hope you start seeing yourself as before soon again....
Hugs
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Re: I Remember
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by Angelic_Demon on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:51:36 PM AEST
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Hey Sharon... This is a really good write. Thanks for sharing...
Blessed Be,
Mars |
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Re: I Remember
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:21:39 PM AEST
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This is a great write....and one that i can relate to so well....excellent job.....i absolutely loved it....if u ever need to talk to someone just PM me
Lots of Love
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Re: I Remember
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:05:57 PM AEST
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| good poem, i feel the same way when i look in the mirror. |
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Re: I Remember
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by DanishPoet on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:14:26 PM AEST
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A mirror shows only how you feel.
Great written.
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Re: I Remember
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:29:22 PM AEST
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wow..... hugs n' love nessa
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