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The Promise
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:41:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The Promise
I hope you keep your word when you promise me so many things.
You told me that you loved me, and all you gave me was a stupid ring.
Ok, it was really special and my whole heart was filled woth joy.
You better be nice and always think twice because my heart is not a toy.
I hugged you i kissed you and gave you all of my time.
Then when i came back around was our love worth a dime.
I was loved i was hated i was even abused.
But one thing that's for sure i was definately not used.
We had a thing it was very true. But now it's all over because of you...
Broken promises........
~Kay-Kay
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Kay-Kay
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2004-12-19 12:41:46]
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Re: The Promise
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:47:52 PM AEST
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| good write but hey dont ask a guy to promise stuff cuz most of us cant |
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Re: The Promise
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by blackholesun on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:11:10 PM AEST
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| kay kay!this is so sad,it sounds like you are better off without him if he made you feel this way peace&love |
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Re: The Promise
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by DanishPoet on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:16:54 PM AEST
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However hard we think, we're better off without, it still hurts, right?
Well put. Good hunting, finding the rigth guy.
Toke |
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