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FARE WELL TO LIFE'S SONG
Contributed by
lemmen
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:42:26 AM in AEST
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My body grows weak with the passage
of time.
The sin within me grows stronger every
Day.
No, pills can touch the sin within me.
I am dying please don't cry for me.
My time here is short may be a month
or two
Let's just live and be happy
With that.
I can write these words to you they
may not be riddles and they may not
Rhyme.
But they speak the truth most of the
Time.
They tell of pain in a losing of a love.
They tell of a love that's here and now.
They tell many things my words they do.
That's why I write them to you at least
you'll have something of me when I'm
Gone
And may you all live life to the fullest
May each day be dear to you
With no further adew.
I
SAY
GOOD BYE
TO ALL OF YOU.
I'll still write don't get me wrong.
I just wanted to say farewell
to life's song.
And to you my friend's at YPDC
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
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2004-12-19 07:42:26]
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Re: FARE WELL TO LIFE'S SONG
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by pixie on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:44:48 AM AEST
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awww Dennis that brought a tear to my eye. it was very moving and touched me deeply *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: FARE WELL TO LIFE'S SONG
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 08:08:28 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, so emotional, and with rythem and flow, you have made magic with these words...tis a pity you wish to end it so,,,,words such as these are mastifully written....and majestically composed.
And will be sorrowfully missed. |
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Re: FARE WELL TO LIFE'S SONG
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by brew on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:57:37 AM AEST
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Well, things to come to an end....well written feelings, and sorry for the losing of a fellow YPDC writer. Thanks for sharing.!
Brew~ |
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Re: FARE WELL TO LIFE'S SONG
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:08:37 PM AEST
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| Well written, I don't know what YPDC will do without you. I don't really want to think about it. Anyway great write |
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Re: FARE WELL TO LIFE'S SONG
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by Summerwine on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:15:57 PM AEST
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| Goodbyes are always sad and even more so if you are ill. I wish for you peace, love for you and your family, and a life without pain for whatever time is left ...xoxox... thx, Yvonne |
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Re: FARE WELL TO LIFE'S SONG
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:20:24 PM AEST
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I'm not leaving YPDC
I'm going to countiune to post for as long as i can.
And with the help of my wife hopefully.
Together I will overcome this.
THANKS FOR ALL THE COMMENTS.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: FARE WELL TO LIFE'S SONG
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by witch_derna on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 07:50:47 PM AEST
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I just wanted to say farewell
to life's song....
NEVER SAY FAREWELL !!!!!!!!
See you soon is better my love.
To our friends here YPDC-- He's not going anywhere soon.
Love MaDonna
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