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My Heart Has Failed Me
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:31:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My eyes are closing
Breath is slowing
I think I'm dying inside
I have looked around a million times
But there seems to be no way out
My heart is failing
Not beating as it should
I feel like screaming
But when I open up my mouth to shout
No words will come out
I start to shake
From the cold
I feel like nothing inside
I'm so hollow
So cold air resides
And no warmth can fill the space
My heart is getting worse now
No one can help me now
My life is ending
And the only thing I had left has failed me
Copyright ©
UnlovedChild
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2004-12-19 02:31:15]
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Re: My Heart Has Failed Me
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by bluebird on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:37:19 AM AEST
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this is awesome.very sad but a good read.
~keep the faith~
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Re: My Heart Has Failed Me
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:15:24 AM AEST
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hello, yes this is a very good write and real sad and touching. i think my heart is failing too.....
take care |
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Re: My Heart Has Failed Me
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by pixie on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:39:56 AM AEST
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a very moving write, filled with emotions and feeling *hugs*
pixie xx |
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