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On The Beach
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Sitting on the beach
Staring out at sea
The memories of you
Come flooding back to me
We used to go on midnight strolls
Underneath the stars so bright
I always thought that you and me
Together were just right
But now I'm strolling on my own
And you are far away
But I'm still thinking of you my love
Through each and every day
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-29 07:00:00]
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Re: On The Beach
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by OreO on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 03:25:46 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, i enjoyed
this one alot. Thanks for sharing
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: On The Beach
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 08:36:39 PM AEST
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A very good write here Candice,
I sort of love and hate these memory feelings!
They remind us of both good times and also of just how kind of empty it feels to be not with this person!
You've managed to fit lots of feeling into this short write, well done.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: On The Beach
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:07:38 PM AEST
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Dean, I am glad that you like this one. It was my very first poem. Written in June of 1989. It was wriiten about my second crush. He and I were really good friends for like two years when he moved away. And I wrote my feelings down and that's how this poem happened.
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Re: On The Beach
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:28:30 PM AEST
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I think they always come out well when written this way Candice.
Very good indeed for your first poem.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: On The Beach
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:49:15 PM AEST
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Dean, thank you. I do think that it came out rather good for it being my first poem ever.
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