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I did it
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:08:32 AM in AEST
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I did it
I know it was wrong
But she pushed me to the edge
I bought a gun
Shot her while she slept
I didn't want to see the look on her face
Seeing her sleeping was bad enough
I just remember where she was the other night
I buried her out back
I visit her from time to time
I'm sorry I did it
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Re: I did it
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:16:13 AM AEST
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| this is really odd |
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Re: I did it
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by Atari on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:10:48 AM AEST
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I understand... Fortunatly i've never done anything like that but have felt like it from time to time. good write i liked it.
Ariane |
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Re: I did it
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by bluebird on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:48:11 AM AEST
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wow this is different but i like it..alot!
~keepthefaith~
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Re: I did it
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by Kay-Kay on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:16:33 PM AEST
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good poem, it's different but thats good cuz not all poems are alike keep it up! :)
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Re: I did it
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by SharonAngel on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:57:31 PM AEST
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| This poem, while dark, makes you wonder, keeps the reader guessing....very good work. |
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Re: I did it
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:27:00 AM AEST
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| dude dont be sorry,u did it,finally gee i would have done it a long time ago,hey who we talken about anyways??i'm lost he he he,someone care to meet half way??great write,if u ever shoot me look into my eyes and dont burry me out back,i perfer to just lay there and raught,LOL,jk,yeah u better burry me |
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