Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 22-November 10:04:11 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Gone today

Contributed by setting_in_the_sun on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 11:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Friends till' the end, only eleven,
"blood brothers" sharing the pain they endured.
This little boy with, pure spirit,
was her, only friend in the world.

When each day went wrong, she'd run to him,
he'd listen intently, not saying a word.
They shared a kiss together,
with him, she knew her existence wasn't obscure.

Each day that passed, so did all her worries,
sitting happily, on top of her bed,
playing with her stuffed animals...
smiling, as her father walked in.

She didn't know the news to come,
as she calmly asked her daddy, what's wrong.
Saddend eyes, the shaking hands,
Which made her little heart melt.

Her bestfriend is gone today...
he got hit by a car today,
little girl will cry today...
dying silently inside, today.

Running to his tiny casket,
the tears welling in her eyes,
she pleaded for him to just get up,
to come and step outside.

She touched his face, so cold, so pale,
she told him it was alright now, she was there.
She would take his hand, she felt his pain,
the frustration, pounding in her brain.

She ran into the hospital,
she told them, she was dying,
that car had hit her right in the heart,
the blood lost, caused her crying.

Her best friend is gone today...
his death hit her hard today,
she screams silently, withdrawn today...
Her only friend in the world, is gone today.





Copyright © setting_in_the_sun ... [ 2004-12-18 23:24:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Gone today (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:17:17 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
this is really a heart felt wrtie and well written


Re: Gone today (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:40:38 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
hello, wow this was amazing and soooo sad....i almost cryed. nice write


Re: Gone today (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:42:40 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
wow that was so deep and moving, well written
pixie xx




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com