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Forever Yours
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Look in my eyes
Touch my soul
Show me you care
Never let go
Call me yours
Brand my heart
Make me fall
Say we'll never part
Grip my wrists
Explode my mind
Kiss me roughly
Sweet as wine
Moan my name
Take me to heaven
Hold me tight
Forever Yours
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ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-29 06:00:00]
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Re: Forever Yours
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by OreO on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 03:21:45 PM AEST
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Wow i hope he's seeing all these
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Forever Yours
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 07:34:13 PM AEST
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Is he seeing all these Candice, if not he bloomin' well should be!!
If this sort of excellent feeling were to be put into words for me, I'd be over the moon!!
I must just ask if you swapped the last two words in the poem around on purpose?
I'm probably being too picky as usual, but I had to ask, don't be mad thinking maybe I'm being too critical please Candice! It's only a question about your lovely writing again here!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Forever Yours
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 07:44:38 PM AEST
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Dean, He has seen some of the ones I written for him but mostly he has seen my other poems because I am too shy, I guess to send him the ones I wrote about him. Just today I sent "For Shadow" to him. And he loved it ( I was so glad) he said it brought a tear to his eye.
Yes I did switch the last 2 words around on purpose because I like the way it sounds this way instead of the other.
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Re: Forever Yours
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 08:00:58 PM AEST
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Phew!!
I hoped you did!
And this is a good start, now the trick is to keep the ball rolling, subtly letting Shadow read more of the ones for him, perhaps without him realising who they're for and about!
You will get there, I have confidence in you Candice, after all you talk to me without shyness and I could be anyone! I know it's different but you can and will do it, in your own good time!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Forever Yours
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 08:10:45 PM AEST
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Dean, thank you for your vote of confidence, I sure do need it. And I am going to try to let him read more of them. And you are right I do talk to you with out any shyness. The funny thing is I used to talk to Shadow with out shyness too. But ever since I realized I loved him that is when the shyness with him started.
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Re: Forever Yours
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 08:30:10 PM AEST
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The same thing happens to me every time (I say this like it's often!!) and most others I imagine!
Candice you've given me no reason not to have absolute confidence in you, you will get there, like I say in your own good time, these things are not to be rushed! When you feel the time is right then you will do what you feel is right!
I am going now, off to beddy byes again.
So have a goodnight Candice, I hope you felt better this weekend than you did last!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Forever Yours
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 08:33:55 PM AEST
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Dean, I guess you are right. I'll just have to wait until the time is right. And I do feel much better than I did last weekend. Sleep well Dean. I'll be going to bed my self shortly.
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