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Boxes
Contributed by
BEBE
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Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 11:11:18 PM in AEST
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Some times I feel like boxes, that are being stacked on top of each other.
Every box that is being stacked, progressing in size and weight than the box that was stacked before.
Thats like my life.
Today my life is stable, but tomorrow my life will get harder and longer and this will continue for days and days, untill one day, I will just die.
But each box getting stacked gets worn out, begins to collapse and holes begin to form.
And by everyday of my life I will start to fade away, loose control; boxes upon boxes untill I just cant take it anymore.
I wish that I was air. Just being able to float.
Ease on past my worries and my troubles.
No wounds able to form.
Never being judged. Nothing expected of me.
Just being perfect, being free
Being ME.
Copyright ©
BEBE
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Re: Boxes
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by Yodo on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:40:49 AM AEST
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But I think growth can only come with pain. Learning only by going through the lesson. Compassion only by being troubled.
And ultimately, the only way to die is to have at first lived. So maybe things will get harder. Rise to the challenge. Don't be a baby. |
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Re: Boxes
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:29:52 AM AEST
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i know how you feel and its not alot to want coz i use to want the same thing now i have learne that you have to be you for you and no one else
dont give up
i want to read more of your poems |
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Re: Boxes
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by kt88 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:21:01 PM AEST
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| bebe you know what i already think of this and it's lovely. i've read all of your poems but didn't comment on all because i comment them all the time. keep up the good work though. love you with all heart and soul. |
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Re: Boxes
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 03:56:44 AM AEST
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BeBe
Nice poem you cover many of us very well.
Pick up your cross,Come follow Me.
When Jesus said this I think He was telling us that there would be suffering in our lives.
Even Jesus was tempted as satan was the most beautiful & powerful angel in heaven--satans last power to be defeated will be Death.BeBe you have good use of words.Write more please.
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