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Dissapear
Contributed by
Atari
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Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:11:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Have I always looked like this to you?
So invisible, unseen, to hideous to look at.
I’m starting to loose control.
You’re all that goes through my mind.
Get out of my head. Stop haunting me!
You’re disgusted with me so leave me be!
I am nothing to you. So let me be nothing to any of you!
Let everyone know that I’ve moved on.
I’ll forever disappear and never reappear.
Just say so and I’ll forever go.
To be unseen in this world is all.
Just let me go!
Stop the torture stop the torment.
I am warning you I’m about to loose it.
I’m going insane. I’m about to drive this plain down.
Crash it into the ground. I can’t see to many tears
All my fears are gone away. I have no feelings left to say.
So leave me today. I will forever go out of your way.
Ariane Brooks
Copyright ©
Atari
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2004-12-18 22:11:51]
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Re: Dissapear
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by namesaretaken on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:24:36 PM AEST
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This is a very sad write
I too know the feeling
my fav lines were
Just say so and I’ll forever go.
To be unseen in this world is all.
Just let me go!
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Re: Dissapear
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 11:12:56 PM AEST
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| Very moving write. It would be more moving to me personally if the word plain were spelled plane.. sorry to be so picky..things like that bother me..I'm an ass hole. |
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Re: Dissapear
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:25:25 AM AEST
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if a person can treat you like this and change from one min to the next and make you feel low
i say they are not worthing crying over
great write |
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Re: Dissapear
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by Mallard8 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:06:40 PM AEST
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| That was way cool, sorry that you had to go through that crap! GUys like that don't deserve good girls like you. |
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Re: Dissapear
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by catz77 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:22:14 PM AEST
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this is a good write
catz |
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