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No going back now
Contributed by
Atari
on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:59:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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No going back now you feel the need,
A long jagged cut that starts to bleed,
A rope around the neck stood on a chair,
One small kick you swing in air,
Gas might work an oven or car,
Going to sleep and waking in a land afar,
A car wreck caught in twisted steel,
The pain all gone nothing more you feel,
Drowning a lake a river or stream,
Mouth wide open in a silent scream,
Electrocution a flash a bang a spark,
One second of pain then all is dark,
Jump from a building a sickening crack,
A ruined heap no coming back,
All these things and more I could do,
But I choose to live because of you.
Copyright ©
Atari
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2004-12-18 21:59:48]
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Re: No going back now
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by jenipher on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:17:58 PM AEST
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| hey i love this poem great job :) |
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Re: No going back now
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by namesaretaken on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:28:03 PM AEST
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I really liked this one very clever work
I don't have a perticular fav line becasue the poem came together so well to single any one line out would be a shame
good job |
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Re: No going back now
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by tissueshaveissues on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:57:11 PM AEST
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| that's such a nice poem. I really liked that it was almost inspirational or something like that... lol. I liked it a lot! |
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Re: No going back now
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:22:11 PM AEST
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this is a great poem....u've done a great job....i like it alot..
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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