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I'm Trying To Move On
Contributed by
Sweetheart
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Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:58:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The days are slowly moving on.
I guess that I am too.
For my love has burned out, now that i'm not with you.
I've been searching for an answer..i've been crying out a prayer.
But now my heart is gone ..and emptiness fills the air.
Now I'm getting used to the fact that you're not coming back.
I'm trying to deal with this a little better, although everything seems to dim so black.
I wish I didn't feel this, I wish I could move on.
Your face still haunts my dreams, and seems to linger on.
Sometimes I look at the places that we used to be.
Then it hits me your with her..and that you'll always hate me.
What goes around comes around although I can't see it now.
What goes up must come down and I know things will work out.
Copyright ©
Sweetheart
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2004-12-18 18:58:52]
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Re: I'm Trying To Move On
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:12:07 PM AEST
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Awww, that's so sad.
So heartwrenching too.
Look, I firmly believe that things happen for a reason.
Maybe this is just to make you stronger. And you are strong.
Um, I think the poem would have a slightly greater effect if the first and second line were made into one.
Still, great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: I'm Trying To Move On
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:42:49 PM AEST
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It does hurt, indeed.
Just remember that everything that hurts us also gives us an opportunity to grow. And I hope you will find comfort soon.
God bless and keep you.
Andrew |
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Re: I'm Trying To Move On
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by justjonesy on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:13:11 PM AEST
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| great job....very moving |
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Re: I'm Trying To Move On
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:51:17 AM AEST
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| Im still trying to get over someone i love. Hes not my first love, but i loved him more than i did my first love. I know you wont believe it right now, but u will get over it soon. |
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