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Once upon a Christmas Eve
Contributed by
exoticwriter
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Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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Once upon a Christmas Eve and all throughout the land,
a silence crept upon the earth, withstood by every man.
There were no voices speaking, no one to ask of why,
nations unite in rhythm, as the stars begin to rise.
The air is thick with silence, as the rhythm makes its way
across the land, across the sea, the world begins to sway.
Hypnotized in motion, yet balanced by their need,
deafened by the silence, continued through the Eve.
Every thought acknowledged, every tear combined,
as nations rose above the grief, it transformed a new mankind.
Repression replaced with freedom, hate replaced with pride,
anger replaced with kindness, as the mass stood side by side.
Daylight pierces quickly as the silent rhythm fades
Peace becomes triumph in the dawn of Christmas day.
Merry Christmas Everyone.
Denise
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exoticwriter
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2002-11-29 03:00:00]
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Re: Once upon a Christmas Eve
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by OreO on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 04:06:40 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, it's beautifully
written, and gives such a pretty vision
Thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Once upon a Christmas Eve
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 10:28:59 AM AEST
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| This was a very good write,Nice job! Christina |
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Re: Once upon a Christmas Eve
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by Brenda on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 04:09:05 PM AEST
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| very good , i loved it. |
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Re: Once upon a Christmas Eve
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 04:09:09 PM AEST
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| very good , i loved it. |
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Re: Once upon a Christmas Eve
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by princesspurty on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 08:08:38 PM AEST
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| very beautiful! |
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