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complicated breed
Contributed by
KOZMICSPIRID
on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 05:59:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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CLASHING THUNDER
WONDEROUS RAIN FALLING
EARTH BREATHING WITH HER RAGING WIND
THE ANCIENT DEPHTS
TOLD THE STORY
FOSSILS FROM THE TIME OF GLORY
SHE CAREFULLY SHAPED THE HUMAN STORY
EVOLUTION -
UP TO THE BRINK OF WAR
THE GREEDY KIND THE ONES WHO WANT MORE
MANY STARVING
REACHING OUT TO THE FEED
THERE ARE FAMILIES IN NEED
IT'S THE WAY THEY DISTRIBUTE THE SEED
AS I RESPOND WITH LOVE TO MY COMPLICATED BREED
Copyright ©
KOZMICSPIRID
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2004-12-18 17:59:17]
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Re: complicated breed
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:01:36 PM AEST
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I like this, but I think it would read better if it wasn't in all caps. Just a suggestion. "FOSSILS FROM THE TIME OF GLORY" is my favorite line here.
Cheers!
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Re: complicated breed
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by Ada on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:35:43 PM AEST
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| I like your poem because it is about the reality that we have today... Do comment on my poems too... |
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