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so irrelevant
Contributed by
blueyes11
on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 01:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Another salty tear rolls down my cheek,
And i can taste it in my mouth
Another bitter drop of sorrow
Falling out of me
And sinking deep
deep
deep
Into my pillow.
The little things have added up
These things once small, now seem so much
And I can't bear it
So i wear it
Streaming down my face.
But tomorrow
Alll this agony
Will be in its proper place
Sunken deep inside my pillow
Long gone
gone
gone
And now,
so irrelevant.
Copyright ©
blueyes11
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2004-12-18 13:22:30]
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Re: so irrelevant
(User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:31:45 AM AEST
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A touching write...
I hope when the sun rises
your spirits will rise too
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Re: so irrelevant
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by unrestrained19 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:00:32 PM AEST
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These things once small, now seem so much
And I can't bear it
So i wear it
Streaming down my face.
I just wanted to comment on this this line....I just love it, it screamed to me as I read it!!! |
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