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My First Love

Contributed by AmazonGirl on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Honey, if you only knew how I feel, what you mean to me... if you knew maybe then you'd understand. Do you feel the same way? Do you care for me as much as I care for you? I think about you day and night, baby... about looking into your gorgeous face. Every time I shut my eyes it's you I see... I listen and it's your voice I hear. I want to spend every second of every day by your side. Sometimes I catch myself looking into your eyes, dying to know what you're thinking; are you thinking about me too?

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Re: My First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 03:57:41 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, hope he see's
this one, you never know what one
might feel unless you present the
situation of how you feel to them
I always say, the biggest risk in life
is not taking one at all. Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: My First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Panther_1978 on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 10:04:33 PM AEST
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Hello AmazonGirl,

I love this one! This was me when I had my first love.. I couldn't sleep, I thought about her all the time! I would do anything for her. Great write!

Panther

Re: My First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsmith on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 01:08:59 AM AEST
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I think that you are less confused and more certain about your feelings which you share with great honesty and vulnerability.

Re: My First Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 12:33:41 AM AEST
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I LOVE THIS AND I FEEL THE SAME WAY

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