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Sister
Contributed by
Magic
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Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:25:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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I have a loving sister, she's miles and miles away,
But even through the distance I hear her everyday.
She whispers to me on the wind, her touch is the warmth of the sun,
Her smile is in the stars above, the moon that is her love.
We haven't always got along, some things were said and done,
I hurt her very badlly, but that's when I was young.
I revealed a deep,dark secret, that's haunted me for years,
Not only do I feel better, now she sees things more clear.
She is my only sister, I love her with all my heart.
Maybe someday soon we won't be so far apart.
Until that day dear sister, I'll hold you in my heart,
And if you do the same with me, We'll never be apart!
I Love You
Copyright ©
Magic
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2004-12-18 09:25:15]
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Re: Sister
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by amber1988 on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:31:58 AM AEST
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| I like this poem. i have a younger sister and she looks up to me and i love her sooo much. i don't always sho it but she knows i do. i'm sure your sister knows how much you love her too. |
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Re: Sister
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by pixie on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:35:59 AM AEST
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awww that so sweet , I dont tknow my 2 sisters, a great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Sister
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by EverlastingDawn on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 11:11:01 AM AEST
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| I love this poem! It's written well, and shows emotins well. I understand how you feel, my sisters live far away also. Overall I think this poem is really good. |
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Re: Sister
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by Dan666 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:29:33 AM AEST
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awww!!! very touching i love my sister too
Dan666 |
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