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Lonely Disgrace
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:44:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Think you know the girl
Covered by small flowers
Watch as she stares
As time devours
Think you know the girl
Floating in the lake
Will she truly always be
Your favourite mistake?
Think you know the girl
Cavorting in the leaves
You truly know so little
She always could deceive
Think you know the girl
Laying in the snow
You really understand
Less than you could know
Think you know the girl
Whose moods change like the season
Who hates herself incredibly
For nary any reason
Think you know the girl
Staring at the stars
Blowing kisses to Venus
To the moon and to Mars
Think you know the girl
Who stopped believing in dreams
Who bites her tongue until it bleeds
To choke back her bitter screams
Think you know the girl
With the crooked, golden smile
Don’t see beyond the body
It’s already been defiled
Think you know the girl
Who to herself is unknown
Nothing but hollow skin
And murky blood and bone
Think you know the girl
Behind the beautiful stone face
She’s nothing but ashes
And lonely disgrace
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Re: Lonely Disgrace
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by kammie on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:51:39 AM AEST
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it was a deep poem it was wonderful !! i hope this isnt about you though .
love from kammie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Lonely Disgrace
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by bluebird on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:06:48 AM AEST
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this is a great write!i love how you challenge a new topic within the same one in each verse.
Brilliant.
~keepthefaith~
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Re: Lonely Disgrace
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by Magic on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:13:17 AM AEST
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| I know the girl, a little sad, but true |
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Re: Lonely Disgrace
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:37:56 AM AEST
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Gosh, I could relate to this. A well-written and full write.
Stitch |
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Re: Lonely Disgrace
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:19:31 AM AEST
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i know the girl and have never left her side
a great write |
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