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Contributed by
mmiss
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:33:44 PM in AEST
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My "FATHER's" Girl
God said "You have a girl!"
She's more beautiful, than any, in the world.
She'll have special needs.
For this take heed.
She's legally blind, but can see your shadow.
But you'll fall for her, so it doesn't matter.
Her mind is slow and she won't read.
Other than this, thru life, she'll breeze.
She'll have brown eyes, like her mother.
Lighter hair, like her father.
The world , she'll love, and everyone in it.
Just like, the way I planned it.
I'll make her smile, as a reminder,
that you're her mother, but I'm her "Father."
Copyright ©
mmiss
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2004-12-17 23:33:44]
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Re: My
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:47:19 PM AEST
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| this is a nice poem it is really very sweet |
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Re: My
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 01:51:18 AM AEST
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i liked this poem alot it was kinda different but i liked it alot.. great job
peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: My
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 05:57:16 AM AEST
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Aww that was just beautiful, thanks for sharing this one.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: My
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:13:15 AM AEST
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Such a sweet write for your daughter.
GREAT WRITE.
~DENNIS~ |
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