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The Beatings
Contributed by
boobs64640
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:25:31 PM in AEST
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I sit here and remeber the pain you put me through
And threw me around like a worn out shoe
Wondering if it was ever going to stop
All the beatings and the bruising from bottom to top
But always in pain so many times you put me down
So many times you shove me around
I shedded no tears and no more was i in fear
You always fed me that same stupid line
I was so numb all the time
And iam so sorry i did this to you my love
I finally got wise and flew like a dove.
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2004-12-17 23:25:31]
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Re: The Beatings
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by freespirit on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:48:22 PM AEST
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well written keep up the good work and welcome to the world of us poets
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Re: The Beatings
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 12:07:15 AM AEST
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pain is something that is raelly hard to forget sometimes you can
great write
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Re: The Beatings
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:03:33 AM AEST
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Such a sad poem, thanks for posting.
Hugs,
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