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Soul's last breath
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:53:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When death takes hold in his steel grip
He cheats you out of your last breath
So he can breathe a little longer
He welcomes those who die for him
Almost lovingly does he open his arms to them
Waiting for them to run into his arms
Like a long lost lover
But most do not smile at him
Instead turn away and weep for what they lost
A rash decision committed in a single second
Like prisoner they talk to life
A vistor behind unbreaking glass
While Death watches from a darkened corner
Behind jelous eyes he watches
A long row of forgotten souls
Screaming to be heard from their graves
The living refuse to hear
Turns their backs on their dead
Saying to them with one last glance
"We're still here, don't haunt us, We'll soon be re-united"
And for me I was re-united with the people I love most
Death asked me for my last breath
I willingly gave it to him so he could breathe a little longer
He gave me the kiss of life so we could breathe together
This is my Soul's Last Breath.
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Re: Soul's last breath
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by freespirit on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:53:36 PM AEST
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I realy like this poem good job
keep up the good work
Merry Xmas freespirit |
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Re: Soul's last breath
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 12:13:18 AM AEST
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| i really like this write and where it comes from |
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Re: Soul's last breath
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:45:20 PM AEST
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Sometimes death is a refuge from living and it is also just the next step our souls take along their journey. Profound, soulful write.
peace
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