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friday night

Contributed by surge_joebot on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:49:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sea of torment in my ocean hollow life.
Black, Gothic clothes mirror black scorched heart.
Never was, never meant to be, never will be.
Ashes again.
Crumbled away with your silence.
With your ignorance.
When you ignore me.
Each day hurts worse than the last.
I only wanted you to be a better person.
So I'm drinking and I'm drinking...
And I almost forgot was clearly scarred inside.
My love for you, written down in so many words.
This old book, these old feelings.
The nervous feeling when I think of you.
The sinking guilt of I still love you.
That burning for you with me always.
The songs play on the radio.
And there's nothing I can do to stop the tears from crying...
When they play your song...
Another perfect day in hell.
I'm not doing well.
I don't need your goddamn *...
Mind your business.
I'll change my world to exclude you.
I'll breath a new way, just so I don't sigh when I don't think about you.
Your gone.
Goodbye.
You left.
So long.
I ran in circles just to love you the way you are.
I stopped feeling everything but the love for you.
But clearly, your gone.
Come back...
No go away!
I love you.
No I hate you!
I need you... what?
***** YOU!
You know the things that hurt the most.
How could I have been so blind.
I didn't love you when I met you...
I wish I had...
I wish I never loved you.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-12-17 21:49:10]
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Re: friday night (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 01:24:46 AM AEST
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very good, well done!!!

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