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I'll Paint a Pretty Picture
Contributed by
setting_in_the_sun
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:19:23 PM in AEST
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I can paint a pretty picture,
A beautiful line of red.
And while I'm painting joyfully,
thoughts of you, rush through my head.
The red drips upon the canvas,
than onto the floor...I gasp.
And fall onto my bed, crying.
I hear the screaming in the background
of my music blaring out...
I can't help but shudder,
hearing the shouts.
And once again I'll go, to...
Paint my pretty picture.
You will feel sorry, when you come to find,
my name... now carved, in stone.
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setting_in_the_sun
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2004-12-17 21:19:23]
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Re: I'll Paint a Pretty Picture
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by MMISS on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:44:29 PM AEST
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| WOW! a brilliant story. very sad though. you know, you really are a great poet! thanks for sharing. |
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Re: I'll Paint a Pretty Picture
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 03:50:18 AM AEST
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| sad, but very beautiful. it's constructed so nicely. thank you for sharing with us. :-) |
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Re: I'll Paint a Pretty Picture
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:06:48 AM AEST
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Such a sad write, very poetic. Nice poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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