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Dear Love
Contributed by
emocutie07
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:36:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dear love,
I know its been awhile since I've written last...
My words well up inside, releasing only tears descending on this foresaken paper.
I wish to tell you everythings fine, but the truth is nothings alright when your away
My heart is cold and empty, only revived by memories from long ago
I miss the ways you'd say my name,
I miss the way we'd kiss,
I miss the way we'd meet secretly...especially on a night like this
I long to hear your loving voice.. A simple hello would do
No goodbyes, not this time..
A farewell would mean only to lose you
Another once said..Im holding on to a ghost, that your never returning home
To this I replied...he'll come for me with loves unspoken promise, and I will be here waiting
For you dear I shall wait forever....
So now I seal this with a kiss and all my heart as well
Slides our letter tenderly in its bottle, and throws it out to sea
Choking back sobs..I plea a silent prayer...Oh dear love come for me
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emocutie07
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Re: Dear Love
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:45:33 PM AEST
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| good write. sometimes we are better off with things gone. |
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Re: Dear Love
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by bluebird on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:51:11 PM AEST
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This is brilliant. I love the descriptions within each sentence,very emotional.
you should try attempting somethign different more often.
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Re: Dear Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 01:57:27 AM AEST
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brilliant write.. great job .. so well expressed
peace and hope
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Re: Dear Love
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:16:11 PM AEST
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First off very good poem...but Crystal, is there something I'm not catching...are you not feeling the same about us...just PM me okay...let me know...
Eternally Yours even if you are not Eternally Mine
Mason |
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Re: Dear Love
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:13:40 PM AEST
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I think maybe I misinterpreted this when I first read it...I dunno, your "my pain for your love" write kinda had me in a frenzy lol...I miss you Crystal
Love you
Mason |
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