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Rain
Contributed by
Makeshift_2134
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:10:19 PM in AEST
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When your stand over my grave
Don't stand and weep.
You know thats not me.
Down into the deep.
My body is dead, that is the case.
But my soul has moved on.
To the next place.
I'm smiling and laughing.
A part of the rain.
I'm happy. I have no pain.
My only pain is missing you.
Compared to eternity.
Our memories were few.
Your life will be full of emotion and pain.
Just think of me, when you see the rain.
Your life will be short.
Make it last.
It's the only one.
You'll ever have.
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Makeshift_2134
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2004-12-17 15:10:19]
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Re: Rain
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:18:11 PM AEST
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A great poem I loved it...
"Your life will be full of emotion and pain."
That is why I didn't kill myself because I knew
I would only give pain to my friends and family
that i left behind. Thanks for posting this I
enjoyed reading it.
Bobo (Joel)
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Re: Rain
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:38:02 PM AEST
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| i agree with joel. i loved the ending. reminded me of many of mine. |
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