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Dark Room
Contributed by
Makeshift_2134
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:02:25 PM in AEST
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I'm trapped in a room.
No sound. No light.
I can't get out.
I cannot fight.
I'm trapped in my mind.
My soul is gone.
So insane.
Don't know right from wrong.
I'm struggling to get out.
I'm really trying.
I'm always struggling.
To keep from crying.
I scream for help.
I yell and moan.
My voice echo's.
I'm completely alone.
There's nobody there.
Now I see.
No one will help.
I only have me.
I refuse to give up.
I claw at the door.
My fingers turn bloody
as I sink to the floor.
I'll always fight.
I'll always wait.
Waiting for the day
I see the light.
Maybe that door will be opened.
Somebody. Oneday.
Somebody will come.
To show me the way.
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Makeshift_2134
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Re: Dark Room
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by Kay-Kay on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:32:16 PM AEST
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i love this poem it has such a good rhyme scheme and rhythm to it and it makes alot of sense sometimes i feel that way keep it up
Kay-Kay
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Re: Dark Room
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by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:49:28 PM AEST
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this is a great poem....u have talent...great job.....excellent write....i loved it
Lots of Love
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Re: Dark Room
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:41:08 PM AEST
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| excellent write =] |
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Re: Dark Room
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by TaintedSoul on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:06:59 PM AEST
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The torment gleams brightly within the words. Trapped in one's own mind is a horrible place to be.
peace
TS |
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Re: Dark Room
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by Kratur on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:35:02 AM AEST
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just like when you fall through the cracks of a video game's programming
bound forever in the glitch room
no escape
save for the godsend
we call a reset button... |
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