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...hopeless
Contributed by
frozenintime
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:01:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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it all seems so hopeless
like it does every time
but this time
this time isn't the same
you're more than a girl
you're the perfect girl
so beautiful on the inside
what are my chances
i would give everything for the slightest chance
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Re: ...hopeless
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:41:58 PM AEST
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| I like it. It's short and sweet, nothing else needs to be said. |
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Re: ...hopeless
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by Mangs on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:36:19 PM AEST
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very nice....i felt like this once....
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