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Just Watching
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:50:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Here I am just watching as life ticks by,
I have seen so many hurt & cry,
Have seen many leave my side,
Witnessed as many friendships have died.
I see all the hustle & bustle of daily life,
I watch as a man kisses his dear wife,
I look on as lovers meet & make love,
I notice all from below to above.
Sitting here by my window,
I watch the trees as they blow,
I see the traffic whizzing past,
I am engrossed in the darkness of the past.
So many hours I must have wasted,
Thinking about things & hesitated,
So many regrets things I should have said,
But I just watched on wishing I was dead.
My life I have spent letting things pass me,
Never sure of what I wanted to be,
But that has changed now I have found my way,
Now I don’t just sit here as life goes by day after day
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pixie
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2004-12-17 13:50:48]
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Re: Just Watching
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:17:14 PM AEST
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i'm guilty recently of thinking to much, you've made me realise maybe i should start getting on with things, great write pix.
Johnny. |
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Re: Just Watching
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:43:49 PM AEST
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| Definitely makes you think. I should take this advice. Great as always Pixie. |
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Re: Just Watching
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by shelby on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:02:38 PM AEST
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| Another thought provoking write. Many of us do this its good to see that your moving on to bigger and better things |
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Re: Just Watching
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:02:35 PM AEST
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| brilliant and amazing write pixie. i loved this poem. you wrote it so well, just like all your others. excellent message. |
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Re: Just Watching
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 02:12:10 AM AEST
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wow pixie this is a very emotinal and yet inspirational write.. I LOVe this one alot .. Great job
peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Just Watching
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:15:48 AM AEST
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| great write..I'm so proud of the pixilator.. :-*) |
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Re: Just Watching
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:26:05 AM AEST
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*hugs you tons*
I can relate hun, I've been there.
Maybe it's time I also found my way...
Great write hunni,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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