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Untitled
Contributed by
vindicated_lozer
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:38:50 PM in AEST
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Do you think it's funny
When you make me cry?
Does it bring you a smile
To see me rejected & alone?
Why you put me through this,
I really have no clue.
But I do know that I can't stand
One more second without being with you.
What have I done that's so horrible
And that condemned me to this life of hell?
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vindicated_lozer
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2004-12-17 13:38:50]
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Re: Untitled
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:57:07 PM AEST
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man i feel the pain through my bones when i read this...that sucks man...but you did a good job expressing how you feel...nice write
please comment on my work too
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Re: Untitled
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:46:28 PM AEST
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| Youe expressed this feeling so very well in this poem. It's powerful and intense - straight to the heart. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:06:48 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Untitled
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by thexshattered on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:22:14 PM AEST
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| Hey, I liked the start a lot. There's a hint of emotion in here... Maybe you could make it longer? 'Cause I feel like it ended a little abruptly. We didn't have time to get to know the person and the situation in the poem. |
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