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Untitled
Contributed by
vindicated_lozer
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:36:27 PM in AEST
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What you call a game
Is slowly breaking my heart
I just can't take this anymore
Why must you put me through this?
I have no reason to live
I wish you would just hold me
And make all of these fears dissappear
Copyright ©
vindicated_lozer
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2004-12-17 13:36:27]
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Re: Untitled
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:44:36 PM AEST
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| good n short shorts always good yea we all felt that way i think im still tryin to move on |
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Re: Untitled
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:03:08 PM AEST
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everytime i read the things you've written I feel it deep within...such powerful words bro....
summer |
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Re: Untitled
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by frozenintime on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:09:14 PM AEST
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| i know how u feel..it sucks..haha..but good write..i like it |
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Re: Untitled
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:47:58 PM AEST
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| I'm thinking the same thing - your poems are all quite powerful and being short makes them even more so. And so many can relate to them, as can I. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Mangs on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:50:51 PM AEST
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intense.....love the words...
Umang. |
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Re: Untitled
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by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:39:00 PM AEST
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short and too the point....i like it alot...great work....excellent poem
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Untitled
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:08:19 PM AEST
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| well written piece. just make titles please =] |
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Re: Untitled
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by punkprincess6689 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:24:02 PM AEST
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| good write and i no how that feels and it suxs. |
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