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Deep Inside
Contributed by
Gemz_World
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:10:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Inside of me is something so vicious,
That it could tear you apart.
Hunt you down and sneak up on you,
It would rip your heart in two.
Memories from deep within,
Just spill out everywhere.
Cold, hurtful thoughts,
So nasty, they can't be brought.
What hurts me the most?
Is knowing you're not there.
To bring me out of these dark times,
And get rid of those fearful rhymes.
I admit i have a severe problem,
Within my meaningless life.
What is it i should tell you?
I want it to be true.
This rage inside me is not my fault,
It's my lonely soul inside my body.
It wants to kill the people i love,
From below or even above.
What i'm asking of you is one thing?
Stick by me, never leave me alone.
Never will we be split apart,
As you will always be in my heart!!!!
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Gemz_World
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2004-12-17 12:10:35]
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Re: Deep Inside
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by pixie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:46:54 PM AEST
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very deep and emotionally written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Deep Inside
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by Jenn2004 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:08:29 PM AEST
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| great write. Let me tell you, today i went for my first visit to the dr to talk with a shrink. I didnt want to go, but my friend made the appointment for me and told me to go. I went anyway, and i feel really good about myself already. |
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Re: Deep Inside
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by Jenn2004 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:08:41 PM AEST
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| great write. Let me tell you, today i went for my first visit to the dr to talk with a shrink. I didnt want to go, but my friend made the appointment for me and told me to go. I went anyway, and i feel really good about myself already. |
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Re: Deep Inside
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by frozenintime on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:11:49 PM AEST
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| wow that's really good..lots of feeling |
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