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Storm in Watercolor
Contributed by
aceJace
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:26:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember you then,
standing boldly against the blaze of color
licking at your form.
And you in that simple, white dress -
an array of windblown wonder.
Open your eyes,
deep wells into the heart of fury -
gray to match the storm,
and stare into oceans never imagined,
thundering toward you,
receding with the tide.
The mist of the storm cups your brow
into proudly held defiance,
your flaxen hair like billowing trails
across a watercolor of memory.
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aceJace
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2004-12-17 11:26:22]
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Re: Storm in Watercolor
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by pixie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:28:00 AM AEST
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that was great, really liked it"!
pixie xx |
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Re: Storm in Watercolor
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:06:57 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Storm in Watercolor
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by newewe on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:06:00 PM AEST
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| This is the first poem I have read recently that is truly wonderful. Outstanding imaging and flow. Thank you for not writing something of just Ï"and woe is me...................doug |
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Re: Storm in Watercolor
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by TaintedSoul on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:42:58 PM AEST
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This has such beauty to it. Truly enjoyed the sunset you've painted with words.
peace
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