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Shadow Girl

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:14:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I am a girl that lives deep within,
The shadows that crawl across your skin,
Here is where I hide night after night,
Holding onto my insanity so tight.

I feel safe when my face can not be seen,
Inside the shadows my ugliness can preen,
I am not comfortable in the light of day,
People see me coming & they move away.

I am disfigured by my horrible past,
Over my face a deep scar has been cast,
Where I once was pretty now I am a mess,
From out of my own skin I want to undress.

Around me I wear a thick, black cloak,
The stench from my ugliness makes me choke,
Forever I will hide within the dark,
As I bear too much of a disgusting mark.

I hear screeching & screaming inside my head,
Makes me sometimes wish to be dead,
I am a girl who lives deep within the shadows,
Inside me every day the ugliness grows.




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-12-17 11:14:27]
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Re: Shadow Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:18:15 AM AEST
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Wow girl.
I don't know how you do it.
I really do love the darker side of your poetry.
This is no exception.

Great write hun,
*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: Shadow Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:48:53 AM AEST
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I loved it !!! Clear images and words that just pull the reader into empathy.

Well written Pixie ... looking forward to our compilation.

Nazzy ~


Re: Shadow Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:11:18 PM AEST
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fantastic write pixie. ugliness is perspective...


Re: Shadow Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:36:30 PM AEST
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lol pix your dark poetry really are awsome.
love it. hugs


Re: Shadow Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by pyro_88 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:08:31 PM AEST
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great write this is somewhat like a poem of mine. keep em coming.
pyro_88


Re: Shadow Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:51:11 PM AEST
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man pix, ur work is brilliant, i hope im as good as you one day*sigh* lol i love it so much, what a great poem, very visual and emotional, love it lots

Jenni xxoo


Re: Shadow Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:42:07 PM AEST
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this is amazing......so sad and yet so beautiful.....i absolutely loved it......great work

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Shadow Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:13:24 PM AEST
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Aww your not ugly, but you have written a very
good poem. I liked the imagery in this poem it
was very haunting. Keep up the good poetry
my friend.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Shadow Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:40:29 PM AEST
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This left me all giddy like a little girl. Truly enjoyed the darkness here pixie! Great job! I can't rhyme to save my life LOL

peace
TS




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