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Memories
Contributed by
ETrojan08
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:06:43 AM in AEST
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Memories
What are they?
Are they good?
Are they bad?
Do we need them?
Memories
They remind us
Remind us of the past
Remind us of people
Remind us of things we have done
Memories
Do we need them?
Yes, no
I'm not sure
Memories
They can jurt
They can be joyful
Tehy can be hateful
They can bring healing
They can bring pain
Memories
What are they for?
Just to remind us of our mistakes
To remind us of our acomplishments
To remind us of pain
To remind us of joyus occasions
Memories
Do we need them?
Do we need to be reminded?
Remined of the things we wish to forget
Reminded of the people we wish to forget
The people we dont want to forget
The people we should forget
Memories
Are they good?
Are they bad?
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Re: Memories
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:18:26 AM AEST
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| good concept. has potential. |
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Re: Memories
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by newewe on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:17:41 PM AEST
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| I think you have all the parts but need to work on a bit more flow and form. It tends to read like and outline of questions to yourself rather than a poem. I find the questions and topic intriguing. Stay with it and expand as it could turn into prose...................doug |
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Re: Memories
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:37:22 PM AEST
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AWESOME!! great poem. it leaves you thinking.....about your own memories...things you both want to remember, and things you wish you could forget
great write
- Beth - |
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