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The Feelings in my Soul

Contributed by givingin on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:04:11 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I sat in my room again,
listening to the music ,
that rules my tormented life,
I cry as I listen to it,
I cry because of my pain,
the pain in my life,
all the pain I have come across.
I do not hurt for my feelings,
but for the pain of others,
my mothers pain,
my brothers pain,
my friends pain,
and finely my pain.
I am alone in this world,
I have no one I can truly trust ,
except for my mother,
all though,
at times I am unable to trust her.
Most of my friends,
they don’t understand me,
they say they do,
but they don’t.
Everyone’s pain is different,
every feeling is not the same.
People say,
I know how you feel,
or, I know what your going through,
but they don’t......
No one knows.......
No one will ever know,
because I am so deep into my emotions,
that I will never let them out,
or be free of them.
So I write here,
this is the only way,
to tell people how I feel,
without having to speak words.
So here I write.
Here you learn more about my feelings,
it is here that you will find,
I am the un-savable,
you may try to rescue me,
but you will not succeed,
you may even be dragged down with me.
So here I sit.....
Alone forever.....




Copyright © givingin ... [ 2004-12-17 08:04:11]
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Re: The Feelings in my Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:35:51 AM AEST
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powerful and emotional, very well exprerssed, you're not alone hun *huggies*

pixie xx

hope that writing helps you as I know it helps me


Re: The Feelings in my Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:27:26 AM AEST
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they dont feel what you feel but they have felt the same thing. you dont need someone to rescue you, youre able to do it yourself, it just might take time. i hope all is going well...


Re: The Feelings in my Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:59:39 AM AEST
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To feel so alone is truly torture...but it produces excellent poetry as this proves.
Very well done
Larry


Re: The Feelings in my Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:21:42 AM AEST
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We all go through times when we hit the emotional depths and feel so terribly alone. In truth, we are never alone, but until we reach out for the One who loves us more than any other, we will continue to feel that way. I could relate to this. There have been too many times in my life that I felt this way.
This was a good spill. You got it all out and said it creatively and with impact.
Stitch


Re: The Feelings in my Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:53:20 AM AEST
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awesome write,but here in this world u r not alone,for everyone out there that can relate to this even the slightest bit is with u,i know i can relate so i'm with u,although with time i grew with my words that r deep inside and i found someone i could trust,but then my trust grew to anger,no i hate that person,meh,great write,i loved it,keep up the great writes

savedbydeath


Re: The Feelings in my Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 06:24:11 PM AEST
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such saddness from one so sweet
hang on
you are not alone.


Re: The Feelings in my Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:59:30 AM AEST
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Lonliness is hard, I am alone but by choice, it keeps me sane and my emotions in check, but for others it can be torture, and your words show many a feeling and lost emotions, beautiful poem, though sad, it stil shows a awesome person, with a wonderful talent, keep on writing.


Re: The Feelings in my Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 02:27:42 PM AEST
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So sweet, so sorrowful, and so powerful. I wish you didn't have to feel these things. I have felt similarly, and I know it will annoying that I said that, but it's true. I know no one can feel the same pain, but they can still care for you. I hope all the people you worry for are okay, and that you don't forget to think about yourself every once in a while. ;-)
^hugs^
~*Naomi of Darkness*~




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