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Pointless Life
Contributed by
desperatesoul
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:34:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Pointlesss Life......
12-15-04
I feel like life is
Pointless lately.......
Every new Dawn,
I awake and
Optimism is gone,
Motivation has
Abandoned my mind,
Nothing Positive about
my LIfe,
Can I recognize,
or Good Qualities
within my reflection,
can I find......
I feel overlooked
and at the same time,,
Singled OUt,
Constantly filled with ,
DOUBT.
Filled with Depression
and nourished by
PAIN,
Vomiting up sorrow,
Need my
SOULMATE,
to Console me,
Hold Me,
and Guide me out of
my,
Dark,Wasted REality..........
by: Dana a.k.a. $avage ~906~ *88*
Copyright ©
desperatesoul
... [
2004-12-17 03:34:05]
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Re: Pointless Life
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:41:05 AM AEST
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Vomiting up sorrow,
i good line easy to swallow
i know how you feel i feel that way all the time and it just never seems to get better does it |
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Re: Pointless Life
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by musicisluv7 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:57:08 AM AEST
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very good poem. it's jus sad you feel this way.
i'm @ the point where i hardly feel nething no more |
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Re: Pointless Life
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:40:49 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Pointless Life
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:08:29 AM AEST
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| I'm sitting in a home without heat..its 18 degrees, my fingers are freezing.. I hope you appreciate this. good write..but whoever said vomit is easy to swallow is a ***** bird brain..LOL |
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Re: Pointless Life
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by TaintedSoul on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:50:22 AM AEST
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So many feel this way but not many seem to be brave enough to express the pain they hold within. Too many mornings I've woken up feeling this way.
peace
TS |
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Re: Pointless Life
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:28:17 PM AEST
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i loved this....excellent write
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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