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It's bleeding, it's crying
Contributed by
musicisluv7
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:39:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It's been hurt it's been cut
It's suffered pain
It's been torn apart, it's been attacked
Over and over again
It's been loved then left hurting
It's been negleted and pushed aside
It's pieces are now seperating
'Cause of the pain inside
It's taking it's time to mend
The damage that has been done
It's longing for a friend
Even if there's only one
This broken heart is hurting
It's bleeding it's crying
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Re: It's bleeding, it's crying
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by Strawberry_Stitch on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:10:05 AM AEST
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OTHER THEN THE HEART IT LOOKS LIKE THE SKIN HAS SUFFERED TOO.
sorry bout the caps...lol good write |
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Re: It's bleeding, it's crying
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:31:57 AM AEST
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stitch i think said everything i could
also i know how it feels to cut i just finished my self off a bit ago |
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Re: It's bleeding, it's crying
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by DesperateSoul on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:37:10 AM AEST
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| Sometimes it's the healing process that hurts us the most!!! simple with the words so it's not confusing yet comes across as a talented and seasoned poet!!!! Great Job!! Keep Writing and keep Posting always!! D.$.~ |
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Re: It's bleeding, it's crying
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by bluebird on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:57:49 AM AEST
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this is a great piece of writing.
I only stopped cutting because it stopped working,now i resort to other things..
anyways,glad to hear your getting better.
~keepthefaith~
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Re: It's bleeding, it's crying
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by pixie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:08:02 AM AEST
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glad to hear you are better now, this was very pained and sad *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: It's bleeding, it's crying
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:07:55 AM AEST
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Very sad write... I can't say I understand.. but this was a passionate write.
Gald you're doing better now..
Hugs
Jenni |
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