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Silhouette
Contributed by
jenipher
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:01:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As she walks toward the mirror
To look and see
A sad little girl
Oh wait thats me
As she drops down
Landing on her knees
The tears start flowing
As she begs and pleads
Why oh why
Do i have to be me
Why oh why
cant i just be set free
The little girl falls back
Lying flat on the floor
Closing her eyes shut tight
Whispering "I'm sorry" toward the door
Knowing no one will hear her
For this day will be her last
On this dark cold world
But you'll still have the memories of her from the past
Copyright ©
jenipher
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2004-12-17 01:01:30]
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Re: Silhouette
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 01:41:43 AM AEST
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| This is a great write. Lots of emotion. Good feel to it. |
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Re: Silhouette
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:11:59 AM AEST
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| Silhouette is one of my fav words this is a great write |
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Re: Silhouette
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by musicisluv7 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:24:53 AM AEST
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very emotional, magnificent
much luv
me xx |
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Re: Silhouette
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:01:55 AM AEST
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| I like this!!! Good job! |
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Re: Silhouette
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by pixie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:11:01 AM AEST
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that was hauntingly sad, well expressed,
pixie xx |
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Re: Silhouette
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by TaintedSoul on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:46:27 PM AEST
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At times life drags us down so low, thank gawd for poetry and it's theraputic ways.
peace
TS |
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Re: Silhouette
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by iluvpencils on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 10:38:27 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write! It was sad and beautiful. I loved it. |
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