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Time
Contributed by
musicisluv7
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:45:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Time is running out
Time is passing by
Time waits for
no one at all
Before you
know
it
,
it
will be
gone forever
You'll be left
with regrets
Of what should have
been, but never was.
Copyright ©
musicisluv7
... [
2004-12-17 00:45:14]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Time
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:14:13 AM AEST
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| a good write though not a perfect hour glass if that is what you were giong for but still a good write |
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Re: Time
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by DesperateSoul on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:39:02 AM AEST
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| Simplicity and truth shines through in ths poem!! Well Done!!! Keep Writing and Keep Posting Always!! D.$.~ |
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Re: Time
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by frozenintime on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:15:26 PM AEST
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| i can really relate to that..great poem |
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Re: Time
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:15:43 AM AEST
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This is so very true.Lovely write
Jenni |
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