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The Rose Maker
Contributed by
MMISS
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:48:04 PM in AEST
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The Rose Maker
There's the rose
the petal
the stem
the thorn
The rose grower
rose picker
rose giver
rose taker
rose caregiver
There's the thorn grower
the thorn picker
the thorn giver
the thorn caretaker
but, He's the Rose Maker
THE ROSE died because of the thorn giver
then, He rose for the Rose caregiver
AND SOON THE ROSE WILL COME AGAIN!
Copyright ©
MMISS
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2004-12-16 23:48:04]
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Re: The Rose Maker
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:07:59 AM AEST
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| I don't really understand this, but I wanted you to know that I did take the time to read and comment.. so many people read my work and just pass it by like they think it's worthless. I don't think that at all..I think I get it..but I don't want to feel stupid I guess. But at the same time I respect you and want you to know I was here. thanks for writing and posting. |
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Re: The Rose Maker
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by ShadowsCloud on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:47:13 AM AEST
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This is good, I enjoyed reading it.
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