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Burning Eyes
Contributed by
unlovedchild
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:38:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The tears I have cried
Have all gone away
Leaving dry eyes
I wish I could cry
They are starting to burn
Like someone stuck an iron right in them
Burning, burning like coffee was thrown in them
I get lots of cold water
And splash it in my eyes
But no matter what I do
They just won't stop burning
I am starting to realize
Maybe it isn't my eyes
It might be my heart burning inside
For no love has ever entered
So through my eyes
My heart burns
Like I am being cooked in the oven
Any kind of love
Real or untrue
Seems better than none at all
Why can't you see
That you are hurting me
By not loving me even a little
So my eyes continue to burn
I am in what seems like an endless hell
Burning for eternity
Someone save me
Pull me out
Or maybe I deserve to live like this
The pain is starting to ease
But my eyes continue to burn
For since no love is near
My heart is staying cold
With one break
It may shatter
But I will never know
Copyright ©
unlovedchild
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2004-12-16 23:38:48]
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Re: Burning Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:51:07 PM AEST
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I Felt This way, one time, but I told myself,
its just not worth the pain anymore, Well Good Luck, and very good write~!! |
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Re: Burning Eyes
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:12:18 AM AEST
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There are more people that love you than you know.
You will realize this as you grow
Nice write tho
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Re: Burning Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:57:21 AM AEST
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| i like this one, it's sad, but good. |
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Re: Burning Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:57:27 AM AEST
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| i like this one, it's sad, but good. |
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