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hidden light
Contributed by
KOZMICSPIRID
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:29:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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WE SEEK THE FUTURE
WE BURN WITH DESIRE
SOFT CLEAR AND COOL
WE TRANSFORM
SEEK JUSTICE FOR ALL
CONSPIRE WITH THE SAGES
CONNECT THROUGH THE NET
WE SEE THROUGH YOUR THREAT
DRASTIC MEASURES
STARSEEDS UNITE
WE ARE THE LIGHT
NEW AGE
AND A NEW SIGHT
NATURE CALLING
COSMOS UNFOLDING
CAN YOU HEAR THE CALLING
Copyright ©
KOZMICSPIRID
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2004-12-16 22:29:18]
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Re: hidden light
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by lionels on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:38:07 PM AEST
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| I didn't understand all of it (thats not your fault; I'm not very good at reading poetry), but I reallllly liked the susspense (What was the 'wes'.) and the question you put at the bottom! Exellent form! ANd good rymes too (the ones you had were good) |
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Re: hidden light
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:58:18 PM AEST
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ONSPIRE WITH THE SAGES
good line good write |
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