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Tripping the Light Fantastic
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:40:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Melancholy John never got his groove on
dancing to that one song all night long,
he was gone.
Thrill kill Jill took that pill 'till
she was too ill to pay the bill
to give her'er fill.
Backbeat Pete couldn't get off his feet
but was complete on that sweet sweet
treat he'd secrete.
These rave slaves pave their way
through societal decay today,
by tripping away.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
... [
2004-12-16 21:40:17]
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Re: Tripping the Light Fantastic
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:42:54 PM AEST
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| i think you were tripping when you wrote this coz how could you coem up with all the rhymes |
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Re: Tripping the Light Fantastic
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by Unheard_Mute on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:04:46 PM AEST
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| wow, that's a great poem... s'all I can say |
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Re: Tripping the Light Fantastic
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by LolitaMarionette on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:07:28 PM AEST
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| I really like this. Its written well and has a good feel to it. |
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