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Escape
Contributed by
blueyes11
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:27:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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There is a song
Pulsing through me.
Its beat is my heart.
The words swim idley
Through the clouds in my head,
Darting about,
Hunting to collide,
To form that long-awaited masterpiece,
To pour down onto paper,
To escape.
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2004-12-16 21:27:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Escape
(User Rating: 1 ) by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:36:18 PM AEST (User
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I cant pick one line i like most in the poem i like all of them |
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Re: Escape
(User Rating: 1 ) by greeneyes on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:41:12 PM AEST (User
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Perfect rhyme, I like this.
Nancy |
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